The good life essay | English homework help

Hello all. I have an essay due in five hours. The essay is already done, but my teacher wants me to make some changes on it. The class is the Good Life. I just need the essay to be fixed, not do a whole another essay. All original work and no plagiarism please. Let me know if you can help. Thanks. Here I am attaching my essay that is done with my teacher’s comments and things to fix and also attaching the essay prompt and instructions.